Is Brick By Brick a good name for my story?

Question by Cheshire♥: Is Brick By Brick a good name for my story?
Okay I really like the name Brick By Brick [: Heres a little snipit of information before you read the plot. Katy and Kris are famous singers and tour together. Katy's boyfriend Logan, and Kris's boyfriend(Kris is gay) Daniel, always go on tour with them.Katy's been in remission for 2 years, she used to have bone cancer. Kris is one of those men who don't look gay, but Daniel does. Also, if anyones offended by the sexual relations please don't answer then.

Katy, Kris, Logan and Daniel are all on tour. Katy slowly begins to get sicker and sicker. With the fear that her Bone cancer is back and devastating the fans for canceling the tour, she keeps it a secret. One night Katy is about to go onstage and begins to feel faint. She brushes it off but when she’s dancing onstage she collapses. Katy wakes up in a hospital next to a Kris, Logan, and Daniel who all have red, puffy eyes. Katy feels a lump in her throat and asks what happened. Logan proceeds to tell her that the cancer is back. Katy bursts out in tears and confesses that she had been feeling sick. Kris storms out in anger and Daniel runs after him. Logan tries to comfort Katy telling her that it wouldn’t have changed anything if she had told them she was sick.
Meanwhile Daniel and Kris are standing outside the hospital. It had just rained and the hospital had a view of the ocean, the last concert they had played in was in Charleston, South Carolina. Daniel and Kris were on the subject of them being together. They weren’t openly gay. The only people who knew about it were there closest friends; Katy, Logan, Bo the security guard, Thomas the bus driver, and the entire band who plays the music for Katy and Kris’s songs. They begin arguing because Daniel wants Kris to “come out of the closet” , but Kris is afraid of jeopardizing his career. Daniel goes back into Katy’s hospital room in anger and sadness.
A couple days after Katy had been in the hospital Kris says that he wants to cancel the tour. Katy protests in disagreement. Her oncologist, Dr. Cooper Allen, whom she’s had as a doctor for the 3 years she first had cancer, tells them that Katy is needs a bone marrow transplant. Her name gets put on the donor list but is very low. Terrified of Katy’s health all three men get tested to see if there a match for Katy’s transplant. Long behold Logan is a match. After her transplant Katy tells Kris to go finish the tour, it had only been a week since the last concert. She tells him that Logan could stay with her and that she’d be fine. Cooper reassures Kris that she was stable for now. After declining time after time he finally agrees. Logan and Katy say goodbye and Kris and Daniel leave for the tour. A few weeks after Kris and Daniel had left for the tour Logan proposes to Katy. Katy says yes teary eyed. She calls the tour bus to tell Kris and Daniel about the proposal. Kris answers and is extremely happy. Kris asks to talk to Logan and they talk for a couple minutes. When Katy walks into the bathroom Logan asks when they’ll be in Las Vegas for a show. Kris says they’d be there in 2 days and asks why, puzzled. Kris says that she’s been doing pretty good and already talked to Cooper about flying to Las Vegas so Katy could see Kris perform then surprise her with going to one of the chapels there. Kris says it’s a great idea and they plan it. Once there Kris is on stage and Katy’s backstage watching Kris and he makes a speech before he sings a song he wrote, Brick By Brick, about when Katy first had cancer. Kris asks if Katy can come onstage and he sings it with her onstage. A couple tears fall down Kris’s cheek as he sings. Later on Katy cries of joy when Logan shows her the chapel and told her that Kris and Daniel were in on it the whole time. They proceed to get married. The next morning Katy and Logan fly home and Katy goes back to the hospital. Katy slowly gets nursed back to health and after a year in the hospital Katy goes into remission once again. Katy and Logan finally take there honeymoon to Germany, the place Katy’s dreamed of visiting. After 2 weeks there, Katy comes home pregnant. Logan is joyful and calls Kris practically screaming of happiness, Katy just chuckles as she watches Logan on the phone. 9 months later Katy’s in the same hospital she stayed in when she had cancer. During labor when Katy’s giving birth there are complications and she dies. There all devastated when they hear the news. Logan is hurt the most. The baby survives and Logan names her Isobel, the name Katy always wanted if they had a baby girl so she could call her Izzy. After loosing Katy, Kris decides to come out about his sexuality, knowing that Katy would have been proud of him. Logan is raising baby Isobel, now 2, and opens the Katy A. Wells foundation, a huge organization that has a walk every year and raises money for survivors, patients, or families who have lost loved ones to Bone Cancer. Once Logan, Kris, and Daniel get older, they retire.

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Answer by Mizzuz Spock [500 little Qs]
Brick By Brick is good, especially since it ties back to something important in your story, the song.

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One Response to “Is Brick By Brick a good name for my story?”

  1. ANGEL GURL says:

    For people that actually like reading and everything not only it’s if you like it but it does have a little catch to it. I think it goes perfectly. I’m writng stories right now and one is called Ghost Wolves. As you can see it’s about Ghost Wolves but I like it and even though it gives away some details already people still don;t know whats coming. with your story they don’t know whats going to hit them. Good Job, very goo. Maybe you can answer my question. This isn;t about ghost wolves it;s about andother story. Ehiliez and the power of Earth. (Might change that.)http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AhJMyzJ9h3OjlFiydxfLkPHsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100711160329AA3hzsu THANKS